You may have noticed that I love writing children’s poems. This one got published by Family Friend Poems.
Enjoy by following this link: http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/breaking-day?utm_source=notification&utm_medium=poet&utm_campaign=htmlemail
14 thoughts on “Breaking Day”
Delightful! I smiled at the little imp’s antics, and loved the ending. 🙂
I loved this poem and it was 100 per-cent readable, but do you reckon you needed the last two lines? For me, it ended two lines earlier.
Congrats – that’s so exciting!
It’s a lovely poem – congratulations! xx
Congratulations Margaret 🙂
Thank you, Andrea 🙂
lol, that was funny (and accurate). Nice job.
Huge congratulations. Very well deserved 🙂
Thank you, Esther. It means a lot coming from you 🙂
That’s sweet. Congrats. :8^>
Thank you 🙂
well deserved – beyond excellent!
Thank you very much 🙂 🙂