I’m pleased to receive this piece of news, after having been writing for hours (yes, my hard work is paying off!) . I was published again, and this time it’s a children’s poem. Pretty paradoxical to my previous thriller, I know! You can read it to your little ones, and even enjoy it yourselves.
Just follow the link : http://bedtime.com/The_Tangled_Web_of_Alice_Young.pdf 🙂 🙂
Words of Margaux 
This poem was great! If my child spoke any english yet (he is only 2, and speaks norwegian) I would read this to him tonight! Perhaps I will find it again once he is a little older 🙂
Great read! Even though I’m not a child. haha 🙂
Thank you! Glad you liked it 🙂
I don’t see where there is any room for feedback on this one, Margaux, other than great job.
I think it is a keeper of a poem and you did it right. This one must have taken a little time. Nice job!
You have a good writing style. I like your poem about the tangle web.
My apologies for taking so long to thank you for visiting my blog. I hope you will visit again, finding more articles of interest.
Thank you for your comment. I will follow your blog so we could support each other. 🙂
One of the best poems I’ve seen in WordPress so far. Well structured, very coherent, well done!
Wow, thank! Have a nice evening 🙂
I like the way you personified a lie and its surroundings. I imagined this old two-story wooden house, the sunlight coming in, revealing all the dust in the air. Then, the web keeps growing and growing on the ceiling into a maze of sorts. I suppose she couldn’t keep up with all the lies and someone pointed out a fib she told. A happy ending for her to say, “I don’t have to lie anymore.”
Thank you for including a legitimate message in your work.
Thank you, again, for your feedback. Much appreciated 🙂 🙂
You had an excellent idea here and carried it out well.
Thank you 🙂
congrats on being published (both times!) 🙂
Thank you!! 😀
Congratulations! 🙂 Loved your poem so very much! 🙂
Glad to hear that, thank! 😀
Well don
That was meant to say “well done, mi lovely!” Then wordpress decided it would intercede halfway through!
No worries, I understood 🙂 and thank you for the support!
Anytime!
Well done. Got to keep submitting them! SD
Congrats, Margaux!
Thank 🙂 🙂
great: the web of lies
Thank you 🙂
Congrats!
Congratulations 🙂 I love your poem! I will read it my young ones (especially the one who is now able to tell fibs). Your poem was beautifully written and I look forward to reading more of your pieces. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much, I’m glad you liked it 🙂 🙂
That’s awesome! 😀 Congratulations!
Thank you 🙂 🙂
You’re welcome – well deserved too 🙂
Congratulations on having your poem published! Good stuff.
Thank you so much!
Many congratulations, Kevin
Thank you, Kevin!
Congratulations, Margaux! Well done and keep it up! 🙂
Thank you 🙂 🙂
Congrats Margaux, I am so happy for you and will be reading this to my children. =)
Thank you Mikial! I hope they enjoy it 🙂 and thanks for the constant support.
Grats. Those successes really matter, don’t they.
Daniel
Yes, they do! Thank you 🙂